This is my first go at a story. Constructive criticism is welcome!
The characters in this story all al fictional and over the age of 18

I was never a popular kid in school. I was a senior in highschool just turned 18. I wasn’t to bad looking though. I was about 5″8 tall and was kind of skinny. Weighing in around 125 pounds. I never dated. Although I always tried to stay in “style”. I would buy Nike socks and Nike everything. I have a huge fetish for socks on people, especially Nike Elite.  This year is when I came out as bisexual.

It was my first day back at school and I was nervous becuase I came out a week earlier to my best friend Ryan and  for some reason he told everyone even though I told him not to. So I was Hella nervous on how people would treat me. But the only thing people did was ask if I really was bisexual. And I always looked down and said Yeah I guess.

Two days later

It was after my third day of school when I was walking home and I got hit by a car that ran a red light. I woke up in the hospital with a pint of someone else’s blood in my body. The doctors tell me I lost a lot of blood so they had to.

1 week later

I’m feeling so much better. And I get to go back to school today!

I walk into school and go to my first hour. I sit down next to this super cute guy named Carter and he’s wearing black and white  Nike Elite Socks which makes him so sexy. The bell for first hour rings and the teacher tells us to pull our notebooks out to take notes about Pythagoreans theorem. 5 minutes into notes I think to my self dam I would like the teacher to shut up. Then he stops talking. Im really surprised. A big coincidence I think to my self. The class and I sit for 3 minutes wondering what’s going on. The teacher has this blank look on his face like a lost child. Then I start thinking hurry up and start talking so I can take notes!! Them he starts talking again. Now I’m scared. That is a scary coincidence. I start thinking to self maybe i controlled him? No that’s not possible. Me being a curious teenage I think for carter to put his hand on my lap. Then he does. Oh god. I can control people’s mind. I think for him to stop.  And he does and he looks like he just remembered where he was or like he just woke up from a dream. I ask him if he’s okay and he says he just blanked out for a second. 

After school I walk home and test my ability on my father. I make him give me 20$. And he does. I think that this is amazing. But I should keep it a secret until I find out how to control this.

The next day at school I see carter and his friend Mariana. They are both wearing Nike Elite socks. Carter again wearing the black and white ones. And Mariana wearing orange and white ones. This is sexy as hell. 2 hours later before gym when everyone is getting changed I think about Mariana coming into the boys locker room when everyone leaves. Then I think about carter staying after everyone leaves to go outside. Sure enough 4 minutes later when everyone leaves Mariana comes walking in and carter goes and sits on the bench. I lock the doors and but a combo lock on them. Now no one can enter or leave.

I think about Mariana taking all of her clothes off expect for her socks. And she does and her boobs. They are medium sized and perky. I command her to start sucking my dick while carter watches. Carter stands up and I think about him not being able to move but him being able to talk and see and hear what we are doing. Then Mariana pulls down my pants and I step out of them. I can’t believe the hottest girl is school is about to suck me off. She pulls down my Nike whitey tighties slowly and then puts her mouth on my 8 inch cock. And stars sucking but I want more than just my head so I push her head further down my dick and she chokes a little but keeps going. This feels amazing. Carter is telling her to stop and asking why he can’t move and what’s going on. I command him to take all his clothes off expect his socks. And start jacking off to us.

While Mariana sucks my dick carter stand there with his dick in his hand watching us but looking scared. I then tell Mariana to stand up. I’m done with this I’m getting some ass. I command Mariana to get on all fours. I’m a Virgin and I’m assuming so is carter and Mariana. But not for long. I then command carter to stop jacking off and fuck Mariana hard in the ass without holding anything back. He gets down on two knees and takes some of his precum from his 7 inch dick and wipes it on in her ass. Then slowly starts putting his dick in her ass. She screams out in pain. I have had enough of this. I put a condom on and lube it up then shove my dick in carter’s ass. His dick gets pushed all the way up Marianas ass. They are both screaming.  The walls are made of concrete so no one can hear them scream.  This is the best feeling that I have ever known. I command carter to fuck Mariana hard and fast with out hesitation. He does as I say and speeds up. I start fucking his ass ruthlessly while looking at thoes Nike Elite Socks of his. Mm thoes turn me on. I fuck him in and out In and out. Just then someone walks in. Dam I forgot to lock the barroom door that also leads into the locker room.
 
It’s Ryan. I decided to see if he will willingly have his cock sucked by Marian. Why wouldn’t he want that. I command him anyway to undress and come over here. He sits down and put his cock in Mariana mouth and shoves her head down the full length. This is a sight to see. I carter then yells out that he’s cumming and I push him forward with my cock still In his ass. He cums in her. I force him to keep fucking her. I focus on  thoes socks while I keep fucking carter. My dick going right in and right out. I feel my balls tighten a bit and known I’m close. I get off of carter and tell him to sit down. I get behind Ryan and shove my cock up his tight little ass. He screams out in pain and tells me to stop. I keep going. I fuck him and fuck him. My cock sliding in and out of his ass a little easier. He yells out in pain and pleasure that he’s cumming. He cums in Marianas mouth and I force her to swallow it all. Then I feel my balls tighten and take my dick out of Ryan and sit on the bench then I get carter to sit on my dick and he start bouncing up and down up and down. I’m so close and I feel my self about to let go so I force him down on my cock and I cum deep into his ass while watching and looking at his Nike Elite socks. I’m done for for the day. I command them to all clean up and forget about his entire hour. Then to return to there correct places

To be continued ?

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